A few days ago we did a writing sample, we could do anything we wanted to write about, and I chose it based on a human and a dog. It was our first, because Mr billings the teacher, wanted to see how well we do in writing. Here is my writing sample:
Paws
Have you ever wondered what really dogs think inside their head? I have , for ages.
My story.
10 years on.
“Come on , work!” I shouted in frustration.
Nothing went in place , nothing seemed to work. All this year , I wanted to make a dog analyser.
It almost seemed impossible , then all of it started working. I did an evil laugh. No! I'm not evil!
Overall , it did take me 5 years to master this , because i'm awesome.
I rushed down stairs threw it on my dog , wait , let me rephrase that , I put it on my dog , to see if it worked. I almost fell back , it did NOT!
Dog's story.
12 mins on.
Hmm… What is this?
She was walking around , red faced. I still had the cool collar thingy on me , it was getting quite annoying so I started to nibble the wire. “No! Not the wire!” my owner shouted , raging towards me. I dashed into the living room. “Here little doggy , I have treats…!” she whispered.
Ok , i'm safe now , I think?
Overall,I ran up and down the stairs twice before losing her,it was exhausting.
Never ever try to make your dog talk , they don’t want it to happen.