1st Writing Sample

A few days ago we did a writing sample, we could do anything we wanted to write about, and I chose it based on a human and a dog. It was our first, because Mr billings the teacher, wanted to see how well we do in writing. Here is my writing sample: 

Paws

Have you ever wondered what really dogs think inside their head?  I have , for ages.

My story.

10 years on.

“Come on , work!” I shouted in frustration.

Nothing went in place , nothing seemed to work. All this year , I wanted to make a dog analyser.

   

It almost seemed impossible , then all of it started working. I did an evil laugh. No! I'm not evil!

Overall , it did take me 5 years to master this , because i'm awesome.

I rushed down stairs threw it on my dog , wait , let me rephrase that , I put it on my dog , to see if it worked. I almost fell back , it did NOT!  

Dog's story.  

12 mins on.

Hmm… What is this?

She was walking around , red faced. I still had the cool collar thingy on me , it was getting quite annoying so I started to nibble the wire. “No! Not the wire!” my owner shouted , raging towards me. I dashed into the living room. “Here little doggy , I have treats…!” she whispered.

Ok , i'm safe now , I think?

Overall,I ran up and down the stairs twice before losing her,it was exhausting.

Never ever try to make your dog talk , they don’t want it to happen.