The blue coloured words mean that they are the words we were supposed to use.
This is my writing so far:
While Mr billings was riding his pink unicorn away from the fire explosion , and the big pile of cars , he saw santa and his unicorn, gertrude went crazy. He loved santa. But the only reason gertrude liked santa , was because santa was quite overloaded.
Now you see , gertrude wasn’t type of normal horse , he could stand on his back two legs for ages. Poor santa had to have an issue with being kicked around like a really large soccer ball. Santa never liked gertrude , once he was running away from him and gertrude thought this was a fun game.
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