The other had to be subordinate (Example - although the unicorn like me , he did grunt a lot)
The sentences had to be based on a picture of a haunted house that had broken and shattered windows and it was very dark. When you were done you could get another picture and write them like that , but still based on the picture.
Here is my writing -
Complex Sentences - Embedded & subordinate.
Haunted House
- The man walked past to the graveyard near to the old house.
- The man walked past to the graveyard near to the old house , shivers went down his spine as he looked at the shattered windows , and walked faster.
- As a gang of people came to the house , they threw stones at the windows leaving glass on the ground.
BeachSide
- The girl digged her feet into the sand like she does every summer.
- The girl digged her feet into the sand like she does every summer , the sea is crystal clear , and she likes to play in the sand as well.
- Since the sun was out , the starfish curled up his arms and blocked the shine from coming in.
Rainy Days
- I sat on the curtain bench and watched the rain fall from the gutter.
- I sat on the curtain bench and watched the rain fall from the gutter as it made loud noises, the rain was heavy , and it looked like it was going to last for the whole day.
- Since it was raining , mum didn’t let me go outside.
Playground
- I woke up to the sun as the children happily raced to the playground.
- I woke up to the sun as the children happily raced to the playground , squealing as they pushed each other down from the ladder.
- After the children had gone , I walked to the playground and sat on the swing.
Forests
- Birds sang as I entered the forest.
- Birds sang as I entered the forest , flying from tree to tree , the river made ripples as the wind blows past.
- After a long and stressful day , I went into the forest. 
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