Inference picture

In Room 12B , we have been focusing on show not tell. We had to write a story by not writing any of the words that easily describe what we are writing about.   Here is my inference story -

Can you guess what i'm describing?

- It was a peaceful day , and we went to the place where there are tiny skin coloured crystals covering it everywhere. The children love to play in it. They build a city everyday they come.  

- I just sit on my soft towel enjoying the fresh smell that floats away into the foam water. Sometimes a faint smell of fish appears.  

- A big gush of wind blew past me. Bigger than the normal kind we get on windy days. I looked up and screamed. I saw a slight line of blue. Everyone grabs their equipment and runs away. I hear children screaming and shouting.

- The big blue block disappears away into the distance , as everyone calms down.

After late , on the TV everyone was talking about the stunning blue shadow that went past. Then , they even went to the area where it was about.

- That frightened me from going down to the shore tomorrow morning.

By Henrietta -